vengeance

Painting \ Uncategorized | 12/30/07 @284 | TepoY | critiques (13) | views (624)

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hi again this is my 2nd art work ..hope you like it ( plz tel me what do you think to my art work)

it took me 4 days on and off
using cs2 and mouse

title vengeance:
a story of a prince who wants a revenge to the demon dragon who attack their kingdom......

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Comments (13)

curlyhair

12/30/07 @359

Both of them have the same legs disproportion - I understand that you've tried to stress the motion but you overdid it.
The composition is a bit odd - I think you should have lifted the dragon a bit
The way the prince holding his shield is weird too - it should be in front or aside of him.
Dragon anatomy is off - it's not that I'm dissecting dragons at my free time,but look at his "arms" - they're weak,without muscles at all
The sky is flat - you should work more on the depth
I like that you've chosen such a big and dramatic scene.It is very dramatic and you've got a good sense of light and drama.A bit disturbing that the light of the sun and the lights all around are of the same intensity.
Mouse is such a pain! Get yourself wacom,man,it worth it!
Keep it up!

Avantis

12/30/07 @395

I think overall its a very dramatic piece and I do like your overall colour scheme. Like Curly said the mans leg is a bit big and the foreshortening is over done. must have been a pain using a mouse, I congratulate you for the fact you were able to achieve this piece using a mouse!

TepoY

12/30/07 @460

thx for the comment curly and avantis i really appriciate it...its been 2 months when i start painting so I am still a beginner...i used mouse for my training..and yes ill get a wacom soon ^_^

astemu

12/30/07 @798

cool work

Madanapale

12/30/07 @841

Agree with Curlyhair.
Carlos

razpna

12/30/07 @922

agree with others ,they say you very useful things

keep working

thomasM

12/30/07 @949

i agree with curlyhair about anatomy and the legs
and i would aslo recommed some more contrast in colors
especially the backround seems like all colors are preatty close together
altough this effect gides the eye more to the action i think it´s also a little too much

Daykan

12/30/07 @968

Nice action scene! Yep, agree too!

TepoY

12/31/07 @147

Thx everyone ill try to apply what you said next time...haha i just love to make action scene and maybe ill make another one but different style... HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

Fuchsia

12/31/07 @744

agree with the others for the usefull bits

and i like very much how you choose the warm darker colors for the bad monster and the cool lighter colors for the good knight

well done !

Happy new year!

takren

01/01/08 @186

Great artwork!

Maidith

01/01/08 @520

I agree with curlyhair about the light. Great and dramatic scenery though

asdrubalpc

05/20/08 @891

good colors

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